very nice explanation of the weird POT foundations scattered around!
shouldn't it be "Mr. Port A. Larium"?
The demand was so great, however, that it tapped even Mr. Larium's
ability to meet it. With a new-found const…
Great story Vyrin!
had one thing:
Benar roused Kern from a deep sleep, disabusing him quickly of the
notion that he was there to congratulate him on a job well done. He
asked Kern to give an account of his efforts.
I think those two lin…
Wow! what an excoriation of OH!!! so very true, LOL I loved it!
just a couple things though:
Happily, Lord Enmar still averts his two blind eyes from all the devilish commerce, and so it continues to flourish.
wasn't too sure about the word,…
another good story.. but...
i don't know it left me wanting more.
a bit more description? just to round it out a bit, perhaps a line or so about the ship and the cannons on it?
you always have very good ideas Womby
good story...but Vyrin, I was definitely feeling like there was romance about to happen here and then... it didn't.
Seems like you (as the author) aren't really sure which way you want to go here... Are they just friends? 'cause that's not the way…
well it says it can export to Word, so im going to hope it will also open a Word document. I did think about just sending it to you via email, but wasnt sure how you would feel about that...so if you want to do that, it's fine with me, thank you ve…